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Buneary and Lopunny say happy Easter! free lineart

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A silly speed sketch I did for a group I help manage: www.facebook.com/PokemonFusion…

I'll probably color it later, but thought I'd give everyone else a chance first :3

Feel free to edit the lines how you wish (I know the anatomy is off a little, speed sketching op :P ) and color it however you like,  just make sure to credit/link to me wherever you post and favorite the piece when you download. I'd also love a link to it to see what everyone does with it :3
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Ok, the first thing that popped out at me was how muscular she looks. Lopunny is a graceful Pokemon (yes, I do play pokemon so this won't be full of poo) Even with a shirt on her arms should not be so defined. This applies to her legs as well. They should show more creases because she is in movement. I can't criticize her hands too much because I can't draw hands either but I do believe that they should be much bigger. Her arms should not get that thin either so put a bit more meat in them (that sounds weird..)

As for Buneary, I can't tell if her legs are on the basket or if there are holes in the basket allowing her to put her legs through. I also think her hair should be flowing the other way. Another thing is that where her arms bend, there should be creases to show the fabric.

I love the pose but I think that you need to fix some simple things. I really love how you incorporated the two bunny Pokemon in an Easter picture X3 I really like the picture altogether!! Hope this was helpful!! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>